potterstoke made the last post
I was a former author of spanking stories, though not on a blog or to your scale it seems. Critiques of what I had written were always welcome and I learned a lot from them. So, without knowing much detail about your story series and its settings, other than what you have written in your OP, I would suggest the following. Double check spellings and particularly phrases. You use the phrase 'up and atom' when this should have been 'up and at 'em'. Personally I would have chosen a different...